Cherry ‘s Iron Man Haikus

Posted: January 12, 2012 in Uncategorized
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Have a look at these!!!
Can you spot any similes?

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Comments
  1. Tracey Harris says:

    Eyes like green beacons,
    Legs as stiff as an old door,
    Scary or Friendly?

  2. Very good Mrs Harris!!!

  3. eithan bruton says:

    iron man was big
    as big as a huge tower
    he squeeks like a mouse

    • Gemma Head says:

      good!!

    • Gabby Fouche says:

      good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!![;

    • Gabby Fouche says:

      good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;[;

    • gabby fouche says:

      good eithan

    • tom shaw says:

      its ok

    • gemma says:

      Nice job eithan

    • sam says:

      to eithan brutun good poem from sam whitmore

  4. Gemma Head says:

    He fell off the cliff

    Big as the effel tower

    Rusty and creaking. you are the best teacher ever miss platts!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  5. Gabby Fouche says:

    He fell off the cliff.
    He was as big as a house.
    Rusty and creaking!!!

  6. joe hampton says:

    Iron man was big
    as big as a huge tower
    he sounds like a mouse.

  7. lewis keenor says:

    miss platts here`s my first try
    the iron man
    the iron man fell
    battered on the beach he lay
    broken legs and arms

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