Cinquain poems by Plum Class

Posted: January 18, 2012 in Plum Class
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Here is Mr Smith’s first attempt.

Metal
Rusted and huge
Hearing, searching, glowing
Trapped under tons of farmers earth
Silent

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Comments
  1. Charlie Plumridge says:

    Here is my Cinquain

    Iron
    Metal, Steel
    A Big huge monster stood
    Losing balance, Tumbling down
    Falling

    By Charlie Plumridge

  2. lewis says:

    taller
    than the houses
    his eyes the size of lamps
    he is the biggest thing on earth
    killer

  3. corey says:

    iron
    he can sqash things,s
    he,s smaller than god,s
    taller than the eiffal tower
    massive

  4. Amy says:

    this
    gint man
    stood at the top
    of the clif silently
    bang

  5. laura says:

    Iron

    metal,steal

    standing at the cliff top

    fell from the top crashed on roky beach

    broken.

  6. Abbie says:

    The wind Saing thro the Ironman,s Fingas and SALUNTS

  7. connor says:

    iron
    iron finges
    blowing in the winds air
    slips falls down to the beach below
    rusty

  8. kiaya says:

    here is my cinquain

    Iron
    metal, rusty
    huge taller than a house.
    slips & falls into nothingness.
    silent.

  9. Christopher says:

    iron
    enormous slow
    head shaped like a dustbin
    glowing eyes sedrch the sea below
    crshing

  10. ella coles says:

    This
    Giant man stood silent,
    On the edge of the cliff,
    the wind blew harder,
    BANG!!!!

    By Ella Coles

  11. Mitchall says:

    metal
    silent rusty
    tumbling on the rocks
    body smash all over the place
    silent.

  12. will says:

    IRON
    stood on the clifft
    staring out at the sea
    crashing down to the beach blow
    brocon.

  13. Tracey Harris says:

    Plum Class, I’ve never written a Cinquain before so here goes….

    Statue
    Metal, Cold
    Walking, Falling, Crunching
    An incomplete lost soul
    Vast

    x

  14. Charlie says:

    i like everyone’s cinquains
    a cinquain has:
    2 syllables in the first line with a noun,
    4 syllables in the second line with atleast 2 desribing words,
    6 syllables with maybe a sentence,
    8 syllables with maybe another sentence,
    2 syllables with 1 desribing word.
    ( a syllable is like a compound word but how many bit’s of the compound if that makes sence)

    😦

    • Mr Smith says:

      Well remembered Charlie.
      The format we were using was:
      One word noun (2 syllables)
      two describing words (4 syllables)
      three action words (6 syllables)
      A four word phrase (8 syllables)
      A synonym for the noun (2 syllables)

      There appears to be some different types of Cinquain. Has anybody else found any?

    • mrs walsh says:

      congats bro but they dont need to have a syllable

  15. charlie plumridge says:

    technically there the same mr smith

  16. Mr Smith says:

    Look at our Cinquain word cloud on Tagxedo! All the words we have used in our Cinquains that have been posted on here and turned into a cloud of words!

    http://www.tagxedo.com/artful/60faf1b03e3644ac

  17. lewis says:

    fantastic

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